红色的铅笔校对概念

书面表达

【解题指导】

中考书面表达主要考查学生初步的书面表达能力，要求学生能根据所给提示，用英语写一篇语言正确、内容完整、语句连贯的短文。情景一般贴近学生的学习和生活；提供情景的形式包括文字、图画、图表、提纲等。对于英语写作，同学们要注意：

1. 认真阅读提示，

彻底理顺思路。

做中考书面表达题时要认真阅读提示，不仅要弄清试题提供的所有信息，还要考虑用哪种体裁。是记叙文、说明文、议论文？还是应用文？如果是应用文，还要考虑是书信、日记、通知、启事，还是便条等。然后还要考虑用哪一种人称和时态。这样就会思路明确，写出来的短文才能条理清晰。

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. 紧扣要点，合理遣词造句。

根据试题内容，列出要表达的要点，找出能体现要点的词、短语和句型。如果是应用文体，还应特别注意各种应用文的格式。造句时应做到尽量使用考纲中要求的词汇，句子宜短不宜长，句型宜简不宜繁，同时也要适当用一些宾语从句、状语从句和定语从句等复合句，以增强短文的逻辑性。

3. 精心谋篇润色，仔细核对检查。

文章写好之后，还应注意句与句之间以及段与段之间的过渡。在需要的地方加上表示转折、因果、并列、时间等的过渡词或短语，如表示转折的词有：but, yet, however；表示因果的词有：so, si

nce, because；表示并列的词或短语有：and, either...or..., neither...nor..., as well as, not only...but (also)...; 表示时间的词有：next, then, later, at last。适当使用这些词或短语能使文章更加自然、流畅。检查也是不可缺少的重要环节，可以起到及时纠正错误的作用，避免不必要的失分。具体做法是：通读全文，看行文是否通顺，要点是否齐全，词数是否符合要求，体裁是否恰当，单词拼写、大小写、标点符号是否正确等。

★ ☆ 记 叙 文 ☆ ★

〖写作任务1〗

学校英文报正在征集有关"保护青蛙"的故事，请你根据下列图画内容，写一篇以A good lesson为题的英语短文。

要求：

1. 内

容完整，语言连贯，书写工整；

2. 词数：80左右。

A good lesson

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〖写作任务2〗

金秀贤（Kim Soo-hyun）是韩国的影视新星，这个26岁的小伙子用他的努力与执着编织着自己的梦想。以下是金秀贤的个人资料，请根据所给内容写一篇100词左右的短文介绍他的情况。

注意：文章的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

The rising star of South Korea — Kim Soo-hyun

Kim Soo-hyun is a South Korean actor and singer. __________________________________

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参考答案：

〖写作任务1〗

One possible version:

A good l

esson

Last Sunday Li Hua went to a pond to catch frogs. Soon he caught a full bag of them. He felt very pleased b

ecause he thought he would make a lot of money after he sold them.

A few days later, he went to the pond again. To his surprise, when he arrived there, a lot of insects attacked him. With a loud cry, he threw away his net and the bag and ran away as fast as possible.

After that, he knew what was wrong. Frogs are human beings' friends. He should try his best to protect the frogs and the environment.

〖写作任务2〗

One possible version:

The rising star of South Korea — Kim Soo-hyun

Kim Soo-hyun is a South Korean actor and singer. He was born on February 16th, 1988. He is the only child in his family. His father u

sed to be a rock singer and his mother used to be a model. In 2003, he joined the school drama group. In 2007, he acted in a TV series for the first time. He went to college and got his first movie role in 2009. In 2010, he got the New Star Award at SBS, and began to learn to sing and dance. This year he achieved great succ

ess mainly because he pl

ayed the lead role in the TV play My Love From The Star.

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