乾貨| 雅思考官最討厭的10種作文開頭，你還在用嗎？

摘要：上榜理由：用中式英文開頭，不僅會讓考官看不懂，還暴露了你的語言功底，語料積累匱乏，是雅思寫作中的大忌。上榜理由：涉及到雅思寫作評分標準中的語法多樣性和準確性，語法錯誤不斷自然會成爲扣分點。

學爲貴教雅思寫作這麼多年，經歷了所謂的“模版時代”再到“擺脫模板時代”，雅思寫作無論是判分標準還是難度上與過去相比的確有很大的變化，當然最直接的就是“分數是越來越難拿”。毫不誇張地講，大部分烤鴨們寫作幾次奮力屠鴨還是停止在5.5分or6分。

俗話說，好的開始是成功的一半，好的文章開頭段可以讓整篇文章立意清晰，邏輯順暢，但很多烤鴨就是不會寫開頭段，導致文章整體跑偏！今天就跟貴貴一起來看看10種考官最討厭的作文開頭，不知道你有沒有這麼寫過呢？

一、中式英語

討厭指數：★★★★★

上榜理由：用中式英文開頭，不僅會讓考官看不懂，還暴露了你的語言功底，語料積累匱乏，是雅思寫作中的大忌。

比如：

寫作主題 1：The happiest moment in your life

案例：In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

寫作主題 2：The population problem

案例：The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

寫作主題 3：Is there fairness in today’s business world?

案例：I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

二、胡亂翻譯中國俗語

討厭指數：★★★★★

上榜理由：胡亂翻譯中國俗語會起反作用，畢竟考官對中國俗語並不“感冒”，反而會引起考官反感。

比如：

寫作主題 1：Is it good to have a large family?

案例：I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

寫作主題 2：Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

案例：Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

寫作主題 3：The advantage of being a nice person

案例：I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

三、超級囉嗦

討厭指數：★★★★☆

上榜理由：開篇就要主題明瞭清晰，上來就囉囉嗦嗦表達不清，考官自然認爲你的觀點模糊，甚至不會表達。

比如：

寫作主題 1：Should college students be allowed to get married?

案例：This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

寫作主題 2：Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?

案例：Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

四、偏離主題

討厭指數：★★★★☆

上榜理由：文不對題自然會扣分，給考官留下的印象就是跑題，想想整體寫作分數還會高麼？

比如：

寫作主題：It is said that nowadays one can‘t acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

案例：I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

五、觀點不明朗

討厭指數：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：雅思大作文很重要的一點就是你的邏輯性和觀點，如果觀點都不明確，後面的舉例證明等都會缺乏說服力，自然分數也不會高。

比如：

寫作主題：Should college students be allowed to get married?

案例：I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

六、語法錯誤不斷

討厭指數：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：涉及到雅思寫作評分標準中的語法多樣性和準確性，語法錯誤不斷自然會成爲扣分點。

比如：

寫作主題：If children behave badly, should their parents acceptresponsibility and also be punished?

案例：About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility.

七、意思重複

討厭指數：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：反覆重複一個意思，讓考官會覺得你並沒有什麼可以表達的，或者詞彙表達能力有限，自然也會扣分。

比如：

寫作主題：Your opinion on DINK families

案例：My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

八、觀點絕對化

討厭指數：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：考生在使用語言描述事物或者表達自己的觀點時，應儘可能避免語言過於絕對化，更應該注意該語言中非絕對化表達方式的學習，這樣才能盡顯文章內容的客觀性。

比如：

寫作主題 1：The importance of confidence

案例：In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

寫作主題 2：The solution to the traffic problem

案例：I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.